Zack Fair Audition

[Snow Villiers]

Name:Zack Fair
Canon RP sample:

The SOLDIER awoke from his sleep in the water at the Aeriths church.His mako blue eyes opened as he floated in the water."how is this i died?"he looked around "i guess its a gift of the goddess"He got to the edge of the water and got out. He walked to a bench and laid down im so tired he thought as his eyes closed and he fell asleep.

[Genesis Rhapsodos]

I don't really see anything wrong with this, aside from a few punctuation errors, and other minor things.

*Approved*