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Post by Snow Villiers on Jul 25, 2012 23:54:47 GMT -5
Name:Zack Fair Canon RP sample: The SOLDIER awoke from his sleep in the water at the Aeriths church.His mako blue eyes opened as he floated in the water."how is this i died?"he looked around "i guess its a gift of the goddess"He got to the edge of the water and got out. He walked to a bench and laid down im so tired he thought as his eyes closed and he fell asleep.
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Post by Genesis Rhapsodos on Jul 26, 2012 0:18:54 GMT -5
I don't really see anything wrong with this, aside from a few punctuation errors, and other minor things.
*Approved*
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